His wound was spurting red
His skin was turning blue
He took his last breath
Before he could say, “I love you.”
(For warmer, less morose, yet still clinically relevant Valentine’s greetings, visit The Blog That Ate Manhattan.)
14 Feb 2007 |
4 comments »
hey Maria, not bad. I’ve been scratching my head myself over some lines this day.
Comment by mark | 14 Feb 2007 @ 7:33am
And a happy Valentine’s day to you, too. ;)
Comment by Ali | 14 Feb 2007 @ 7:59am
Excellent poem!
ANd Happy Valentine’s Day to you, too!
Comment by TBTAM | 14 Feb 2007 @ 10:45am
heehee. happy singles-awareness day!
Comment by yaser | 14 Feb 2007 @ 8:11pm
Say something.